Leo
Inspired by the horoscope: "Don't rob
others of their delusions. The truth will come out when it's supposed to."
Also inspired by Shay.
Leo pushed up his large glasses and nervously
looked around. Leo was used to sitting in the airport waiting for his flight
home to Atlanta. Leo checked his watch. Ten minutes until his flight. Leo was
surprisingly nervous for this flight. Leo was an experienced flier; however,
something about this flight seemed a bit off to him. As large as the Atlanta
airport is, Leo had never once flown there. He looks around at the other
passengers preparing to board the flight. An old lady with a walker. Lots of
men in business suits. A couple with two small children.
For
some reason, this made Leo even more nervous. Finally, the plane came and the
line slowly began to shuffle onto the plane. When Leo boarded, he knew
something was off. There was a sound coming from under the plane. Although the
low hum was calming, Leo thought it seemed unnatural. Almost like the engine
was overheating.
Leo
talked to the stewardess of the flight, asking about the sound.
“Oh,
hun. Is this your first time flying?” she asked in a thick southern accent.
“No,”
Leo responds.
“You’ll
be fine, hun. This plane’s an oldie but goodie.”
As
the plane took off, Leo began to hear a soft rattle from below. An oldie but goodie, the stewardess’s
words echoed in his mind. Leo can’t wait for the flight to be over.
One
of the small children Leo saw earlier begins to cry. This flight is getting
more and more uncomfortable. Leo stands up and begins walking to the
stewardess.
“We
aren’t safe on here,” Leo said.
“What
makes you say that, sir?” the stewardess responded.
“I
don’t know. I just have a feeling—“
“If
you know of some danger please share, or go sit down.” Leo opened his mouth to
respond, however no words came out, only a loud pop from under the plane.
The
plane began plummeting, Leo could feel it. As the rest of the passengers begin
to realize their situation, Leo began to except his fate.
They
are all going to die with this plane.
“I
tried warning,” Leo began, looking at the stewardess. A crash from the snack
cart running into the front wall interrupted his speech. “You. I tried to warn
you,” he finishes.
As
the plane fell, it began shaking violently. Leo fell to the ground where he
landed next to a fortune cookie from the snack cart. He decided to open it up
and read his final fortune.
“Don’t
rob others of their delusions. The truth will come out when it’s supposed to.”
Well, Leo thought, the truth is out. This plane is going to explode and all of the
passengers are going to fly everywhere.
Leo
thought about the old lady, the young couple, the little kids.
As
the plane made contact with the ground Leo flew out, greeting the white lights
of the sky above.
I really like how it was written. I think my favorite part was the fact that you said 'oldie and goodie'. Instead of saying 'old but works well', you gave the character a little personality. It is just well written. As per always.
ReplyDeleteYou've tapped into a common fear here, something we have probably all thought about or imagined no matter how much we travel. It's interesting that your character accepts his fate and is resigned to the fall rather than panicking or moving about in a frenzy. I like that his thoughts turn to others rather than himself before the final impact, too.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I figured everyone else was frantically panicking. I thought Leo would be more calm about it.
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